My story

Hi!  Its cooldog here and this is a story i made in class.  hope you enjoy!

 

 

 

The rainbow of doom

 

Once there was a rainbow called Hunter. It was a very nice rainbow.  One day he was called into duty to fight the evil rainclouds.  But when his mother, queen of the rainbows, found out she ordered him to come back her popularity took a nosedive.  People said “If our sons have to fight why doesn’t hers, besides he should be setting an example for other rainbow troops to follow.”  Hunter wanted to go to battle, but his mother said, “I’ve only got one son and if you die I’ve got no heir and there will be chaos and everybody will be scrabbling.”   But even Hunter said that he that he should be setting an example for all the others.  So one day he packed his magic bag, Bags and ran off to fight the evil rainclouds at the battle of Gfkhasjaghkfsd. Gfkhasjaghkfsd is battlegrounds were every battle is put there because they didn’t ruin every other place.  It took 2 years but it turned him into the best rainbow in the army.  Finally he was sent into battle at Gfkhasjaghkfsd.  Hunter definitely proved himself.  But when his mother found out she was in a rage.  She smashed everything in sight.  After she smashed everything left to smash she declared him an outlaw (that’s what caring mothers do.  Just joking!).  When Hunter found out that his mother found out and smashed everything even his Xbox he was even more enraged so that he destroyed his mother’s locket.  He crafted the best axe he could along with the best armor (it wasn’t very good because he was a warrior not a blacksmith).  Then he made a shield, which wasn’t very good either because he wasn’t a wood smith.  Then he was ready to fight.  The first adventures are not very important but because I’m a good author I’ll tell you about it.  Here is the first one: so once there was a forest where Hunter lived. It was also a place where all the rich people and the poor people had their meetings.  One day (because he didn’t know that they held meetings) he saw that there heaps of people with lots and lots of treasure (these were innocent taxpayers money to pay for some heavy taxes) for the governor (because he was evil don’t ask me they all seem evil to everybody except the governor).  When Hunter saw these he went wild!!!  He ran this way and that way killing rainbows here and there and everywhere!!!  The citizens moaned “It’s not fair”.  “What have we ever done to you”?!?!?!?  But Hunter didn’t take any notice at all